these are great man! you've really come along way.
the first one is a great color study, you really nailed it! the only thing it lacks is a focus, a little something that could be the subject of the painting.
the second one has some really nice vibrancy. but the foreground comes across as a bit odd and unused, so i would suggest cutting it off to reposition the godrays better. compositionally, that area of light is statically in the middle of the frame, the mtns cut an equal lateral line through the middle as well, so it ends up being a little stale.
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these are great man! you've really come along way.
the first one is a great color study, you really nailed it! the only thing it lacks is a focus, a little something that could be the subject of the painting.
the second one has some really nice vibrancy. but the foreground comes across as a bit odd and unused, so i would suggest cutting it off to reposition the godrays better. compositionally, that area of light is statically in the middle of the frame, the mtns cut an equal lateral line through the middle as well, so it ends up being a little stale.
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