This is the finished product. Tyler, I agree with your comments on hierarchy, but a lot of this was already glued down by the time I read your comment (you know I'm impatient). However, I think I have created a main focal point and overall solid comp. I realized that I was creating kind of a reflection in earlier stages of this, so I decided to go with that idea. Although it is done, I am open to critique that might be helpful for further collages. P.S. Geoff, I responded to your comment but blogger was down for a day and they were gone when it came back.
Saturday, May 14, 2011
The Finished Product
This is the finished product. Tyler, I agree with your comments on hierarchy, but a lot of this was already glued down by the time I read your comment (you know I'm impatient). However, I think I have created a main focal point and overall solid comp. I realized that I was creating kind of a reflection in earlier stages of this, so I decided to go with that idea. Although it is done, I am open to critique that might be helpful for further collages. P.S. Geoff, I responded to your comment but blogger was down for a day and they were gone when it came back.
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this could be a great editorial image. there's this suggestion of narrative going on that has potential.
I get the reflection now. There are a few things you could do to make it more apparent. e.g Some transparent horizontals over the bottom.
To go along with Geoff, it does have this think-bubble thing happening, like remembering or self-reflecting.
these are getting stronger every time. I like the final comp best.
I think continuing to have a narrative feel is a great direction to take with these.
Incorporating sentences into the work like kershiznic might be cool to try.
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