i agree with Brandt. they just seem unfinished, so it's hard to pick a point to critique. they just seem like 50% something...
i like the desaturated palette, but you'll need be keen on value contrast. they will definitely need strong contrasting visual moves whither it be hard/soft, light/dark, etc. so that the whole thing doesn't just end up being bla.
I actually think these are a really good start. I like the softness and the muted palette; on the bottom it works in especially well with the subject matter.
You just need to work it up. As you go, perhaps upping saturation and viscosity just a tad as tools of refinement.
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If these were complete they both lack some kind of focal point. Nothing stands out overly strong to say what they are about.
Is there a reason for the haze over the bottom of the top piece and the top of the bottom piece?
I like the comp in the bottom piece but I don't know what else to say at this stage
i agree with Brandt. they just seem unfinished, so it's hard to pick a point to critique. they just seem like 50% something...
i like the desaturated palette, but you'll need be keen on value contrast. they will definitely need strong contrasting visual moves whither it be hard/soft, light/dark, etc. so that the whole thing doesn't just end up being bla.
I actually think these are a really good start. I like the softness and the muted palette; on the bottom it works in especially well with the subject matter.
You just need to work it up. As you go, perhaps upping saturation and viscosity just a tad as tools of refinement.
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