the bone and gristle read really well in this one. and the color contrast on the cool background works great. that red reflected light could be an interesting 'happy accident,' i like it as is. i'd just want to see it introduced a little more purposefully into the scene.
something about the levitating and everything standing uniformly upright kind of bugs me though. maybe it's a composition thing, that the far left bone is the front most seems to spatially unbalance things, even though the 2-dimensional placement of the elements within the picture plane should work.
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the bone and gristle read really well in this one. and the color contrast on the cool background works great. that red reflected light could be an interesting 'happy accident,' i like it as is. i'd just want to see it introduced a little more purposefully into the scene.
something about the levitating and everything standing uniformly upright kind of bugs me though. maybe it's a composition thing, that the far left bone is the front most seems to spatially unbalance things, even though the 2-dimensional placement of the elements within the picture plane should work.
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