And please keep in mind that the whole thing looks SLIGHTLY bluer than the actual painting...courtesy of quick-sloppy photography outside. Tried to photoshop it, but apparently I didn't make enough changes. And as with almost all of my paintings, the background is largely gold gesso.
Oh, and please don't tell me that my teddy looks like a rat. My husband already let me know.
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There is an annoying "stop" right where the bear's nose and the book corner meet. One should overlap the other.
2nd that.
the composition is great, but i would also say that there needs to be some definition to provide more of a focus somewhere. every edge is treated the same, and almost all of the mark making is the same. she has no face, so i assume that either the book or the t-bear would be the focus, but they need to refined a little further to become so.
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